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Life Fought

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Standing on the edge of the world,
Seeing everything out before me.
Just staring out in total awe,
Constantly thinking of the past.

Recalling past moments that made me,
Suffering in all the painful moments.
Yet becoming stronger in some semblance,
Wanting to stay here to face the world.

I want to be brave and take all head on,
Maybe to over come something for once.
I will not fade from life to my death,
I will fight and keep fighting through.

I will still fight with my sword in hand,
Lifting my head up high to face you now.
With new life I jump from the cliffs edge,
Free falling towards the enemy of my heart.

I fall with my sword in hand out before me,
With you my enemy getting all the closer.
Still very afraid of failing to you again,
But I will not falter my suffering fears.

I faced one of my fears already,
So I will believe I can face you.
It's seems my need to right is upsetting some but getting out how i feel helps. So for you guys i wrote this. I was listening to This is War by 30 Seconds to Mars.
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Writing can save lives. Through highschool it was the only way I could voice my tide of emotions without making life hell for my family. In the end I find my writing sometimes overcomes my desire to work on art because in a way, even though I might be writing a fictional story, I am driven by the words I wish I could say out loud. Instead, those words are recycled into a new world where my characters play out the most painful and most meaningful aspects of my life in their own ways.

Who cares if it upsets some if it makes you feel better. That is really all that matters.

I am finding myself appreciative of your rise and fall mentality in this piece. The self doubt and the will to over come in the end is truly inspiring. Wording your self struggle in a way that each and every one of us have known at one time or another. So, your words have sent a message, you've already won the battle in my eyes.